I think children should not be allowed to eat chocolates whenever they want to because they are not good for them.
They are full of sugar and they are sweet too. Chocolates are bad for their teeth. They rot their teeth. Eating too much of chocolates can make you sick.
So I think children should only eat chocolates now and then is all right.
I like the way that you write about the persuasive writing about argue against the cholcolates.
ReplyDeleteGood boy, and keep it up in good work.
thank you Miriama nice work
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