Kia ora ko Nathan taku ingoa, No te kura o Karoro ahau.
I really enjoyed your poem and how you wrote what you like. It is cool that you like learning, I like learning to. It is cool that you would like to be a rugby player.
When I read your poem I remembered that I have been to Panmure in Auckland before. I also saw that you have 6 brothers and 6 sisters, I have no siblings so that is very different to what I have.
Maybe next time you should work on your grammar and where you put punctuation. Also you shouldn't put your address because people could come to your street and try to find you or kidnap you.
Kia Ora, ko Callan taku ingoa, nō te kura o Karoro ahau. I really like your poem and it is nice to know that you have white teeth. When I read your poem the thing that connected with my life is being scared of horror movies. The thing that I think that you need to improve on is that you shouldn't put your Address on your blog because people could come to your street and try and find you. You might want to come and view my blog Callan @ Karoro School.
Kia ora ko Nathan taku ingoa,
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I really enjoyed your poem and how you wrote what you like. It is cool that you like learning, I like learning to. It is cool that you would like to be a rugby player.
When I read your poem I remembered that I have been to Panmure in Auckland before. I also saw that you have 6 brothers and 6 sisters, I have no siblings so that is very different to what I have.
Maybe next time you should work on your grammar and where you put punctuation. Also you shouldn't put your address because people could come to your street and try to find you or kidnap you.
From Nathan.
Kia Ora, ko Callan taku ingoa, nō te kura o Karoro ahau. I really like your poem and it is nice to know that you have white teeth. When I read your poem the thing that connected with my life is being scared of horror movies. The thing that I think that you need to improve on is that you shouldn't put your Address on your blog because people could come to your street and try and find you. You might want to come and view my blog Callan @ Karoro School.
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