Kia Ora Ko Caleb taku ingoa no te kura o karoro ahau Hello Peter I really enjoyed reading your report about dire wolves. it was very interesting to learn that they lived in the Pleistocene Era that was 250 thousand years ago with the time
It was hard to understand because at the start of the first paragraph where you put where the lived you hadn’t checked that your writing made sense. Also your structure in your writing was good but there were a couple times that your work was hard to understand.
Kia ora, ko Eamon taku ingoa, nō te kura o Karoro ahau. Hello Peter I really enjoyed the facts about the dire wolves. I didn’t not know that they were that long and weighed that much. It was really interesting reading about the dire wolves but it was hard to understand for example it said “Dire wolves once walked the land on the land called America” you could change it so it could make more sense. It was cool to know that they lived during the Pleistocene and that it was 250,000 to 10,000 years ago. Thank you for sharing that information about dire wolves.
Kia Ora Ko Caleb taku ingoa no te kura o karoro ahau
ReplyDeleteHello Peter I really enjoyed reading your report about dire wolves. it was very interesting
to learn that they lived in the Pleistocene Era that was 250 thousand years ago with the time
It was hard to understand because at the start of the first paragraph where you put where the lived you hadn’t checked that your writing made sense. Also your structure in your writing was good but there were a couple times that your work was hard to understand.
I think dire wolves are cool
Kia ora, ko Eamon taku ingoa, nō te kura o Karoro ahau.
ReplyDeleteHello Peter I really enjoyed the facts about the dire wolves. I didn’t not know that they were that long and weighed that much. It was really interesting reading about the dire wolves but it was hard to understand for example it said “Dire wolves once walked the land on the land called America” you could change it so it could make more sense. It was cool to know that they lived during the Pleistocene and that it was 250,000 to 10,000 years ago. Thank you for sharing that information about dire wolves.