The Day I saved Emily-by Peter

                  
Learning Intention:we are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in 
order,and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
                                 
Last Monday I went down by the river. I  was fishing with my  brother and my cousin. There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting for help.

I dashed in the water and pulled her out. I had my clothes on and I was shivering. Afterwards her mum said, 'Thank you so much," Her mum take her home and put her to sleep.

Peter, , Playing football

I played football with 'Ofa and Augustine. 

'Ofa ran fast. He kicked the ball to Augustine. Augustine ran fast. He kicked the ball to me. I ran fast like a speeding car. I kicked the ball. The ball went into the goal. 

We had fun.