Learning Intention:we are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in
order,and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
Last Monday I went down by the river. I was fishing with my brother and my cousin. There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting for help.
I dashed in the water and pulled her out. I had my clothes on and I was shivering. Afterwards her mum said, 'Thank you so much," Her mum take her home and put her to sleep.
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