Evaporation-by Peter

                            Water cycle     
Learning Intention:we are Learning to use the Information we gathered about Water cycle.

Success Criteria:I am Successful when I can use the Information we gathered about Water cycle.

                          Evaporation

Hi !my name is Jackson the droplet. I was in the flowerpot.I got so hot because the  sun shines on me.So I float up in the sky.While I was up in the sky I saw my friends.So we gather and play tag and we form a great big grey cloud.   

Homework is fun-By Peter

Learning Intention:We Are Learning To-write a persuasive writing.

Success Criteria:I am successful when I persuade someone to my argument..

I am in year 4 and I think children should get homework  because it will help us learn more things.

I think children should have  homework because they can become smart and clever. Homework can make your reading high.Homework will help you to move in a high level group. Kids should have a homework because is important to learn more work. If  kids do not have homework they might become lazy, dumb and silly.

Adding using grouping of ten:by Peter

Before the spirit came-by Peter

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-Identify how the disciple felt before the Pentecost.Success Criteria:I am successful When I tell the feelings of the disciple before the holy spirit come.

disciple the  before the holy spirit came...

Jesus show tapu in people -by Peter

Learning Intention: W.A.L.T-identify ways that Jesus showed respect for the tapu in people.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can draw one picture of Jesus showing his respect to a blind man.

 Jesus showed respect the tapu in people by making blind man to see again. 

Sharks- By Peter

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a report.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can write a report about sharks.

Sharks are fish.They are cold blooded. They are not mammals.

Sharks have fins to balance.They have gills to breath.The sharks have their tail to help them move faster.They have sharp teeth.Some sharks are grey and blue.

Sharks eat smaller fish.Some times they eat sea lions and seagulls. Sharks also eat seaweeds.
Some sharks live in the river.Other sharks live in the cold or warm water.Sharks live everywhere in the oceans. 

Sharks are dangerous. 



  

To my foot ball. by Peter.

Learning.Intention:w.a.l.t:write a recount.

Success.Criteria.I know I can do this when I use capital letter and use full stop correctly.
                                                                                                          I'm happy because it was last game of foot ball.It was also it was a little bit hard because it have hard kid's.After that my team gather and we make a plan to win so we start the game then when we play we got the last goal.Last we went back home and we watch movie and play games.Finally we help our mum and dad to clean the house and also outside. 

Whales.by Peter

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-write a report.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can a report about whales.
Whales are mammals.They are very big.They look like a shape of a fish.They use their flippers to balance their  body.They move around with their large tail. They also jump back in the water. They live in the oceans.

They can survive in both warm and cold water.

They breath air into their lungs.

breakfast by the shore.by .Peter.

Learning Intention:W.A.LT-retell one of the after Easter stories.
Success Criteria:I am successful when I can retell the after Easter stories thru drawing.
                                   

 1. The disciples were  fishing all night but they did not  catch any.
 2. Someone called out  to throw the net to the other side of the boat.
3.Peter knew that was Jesus so he jump and swam in the water.
4.Jesus said"come my friend and have breakfast with me.    

Katie glen.by Peter

Learning-Intention:W.A.L.T:write a recount.
                                                                                                                                                             Success-Criteria:I know I can do this when I use capital letters and write my story in Order and use full stop correctly.                                                                                                                                                                               

                                                                                                                                    First we went to the hall and then we sat down  on the floor. Then Mrs Dines put up her hand.     After that Mrs Dines introduced Katie Glenn and she showed us a power point.Next she showed us  a video of her last game and saw her get a goal. Finally we got to ask questions Launoa went and said thank you to Katie Glen and said thank you for coming and showed us your goal.Last we went back to school and write about her. 

ST Patrick's Day.by Peter.

Learning.Intention-W.A.L.T-write a recount.

Success.Criteria.I know I can do this when I use capital letter and use full stop correctly.

 Yes it's Friday! We had a celebration because it was St. Patrick day. First we went to church and prayed to God.After that we had games.Our first games  was Rob the golden egg. I ran and ran back and then I went and rob the other teams golden ball. After that we were went to do our book mark.Finally we sat under the tree and eat our ice block.When we were finished eating ice block we ran to get our lunchbox and eat our lunch. After that we play. Later our dad came and take us home.It was a fun day ever.

Storm Water Drain.by Peter

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We show love and respect -by Peter

Learning Intention:W.A.L.T-recognise what God has created is Tapu because God is Holy.

Success Criteria:I know I am successful when I can demonstrate love and respect for Gods creation.

1.We pick rubbish to make our surrounding clean.

2. We look up after the tree.Tree gave us food, shelter and oxygen.

3.We keep the sea and river clean.Sea and river gave us food,water to drink, and a place to swim.

                                 

Prayer-by Peter

Learning.Intention:W.A.L.T:Recognise Lent as a season for turning back to God.                                                                                    
Success.Criteria:I know I can do this when I turn back to God through prayers

 Dear God please help the builder to build up our classroom. Help my dad find a job.
Help me in my school work and help me to listen to my teacher Amen.

The Day I saved Emily-by Peter

                  
Learning Intention:we are learning to write a recount.
Success Criteria:I know I can do this when I write my story in 
order,and use capital letters and full stops correctly.
                                 
Last Monday I went down by the river. I  was fishing with my  brother and my cousin. There was a loud scream. A little girl was in the cold water. She was shouting for help.

I dashed in the water and pulled her out. I had my clothes on and I was shivering. Afterwards her mum said, 'Thank you so much," Her mum take her home and put her to sleep.